REVIEW ON "Bella Mia"
Based on the first 3 chapters
(DISCLAIMER! My reviews are for your benefit. I am in no way trying to humiliate or be rude to you. Everything is truthful and I do reviews to help your story improve.)
Torn between her music career, what her family expects from her, and college. This is the beginning of a very cute and interesting love story! It shows some of the realities of life. Sacrifice. She sacrificing her dream of a music career to help out her family. I really like Chris so far. He seems so sweet! I haven't gotten to know the mysterious handsome stranger yet, but I'm excited to find out more!
Your directing was pretty good! I would suggest some things for the mirror scene. The actions she was doing in rear didn't match what her reflection was doing. I would suggest to not use actions where she's using her arms/hands. But I really liked everything else!
I don't think I spotted any mistakes. I thought it was cool how you included some Italian words since they're an Italian family in your story!
You left me on such a good cliffhanger of your 3rd episode that I just have to continue reading! I must know how their performance will go, and what it brings afterwards. Very good job!
Weighted pull-ups 👏🏽 As of lately I've been doing strictly bodyweight pull-ups but I don't get the same stimulation that I was getting so I switched to increasing the weight, I start with a 25LB plate with 4 sets of 7 reps then move to a 45LB plate with 3 sets of 5 reps. This helps me concentrate on each individual rep carefully. Keeping in mind to focus primarily on the eccentric movement. This will maximize the amount of stimulation for the area I'm trying to grow. In this case it's the lats! 💪🏽🙏🏽#pullups#weightedpullups#asthetic#functionalfitness#weightlifting#weightlifter#25lbs#45lbs @i.lvl.i
Mi isla bonita. First of all I want to say i hope everyone is okay. Puerto Rico you are strong I have faith in you that you will get back up on your feet before you even expect, yo have so much to offer in that little 100x35. I'm happy that in so much caos i see the people stronger than ever helping each other with the right attitude of "echar pa lante" today you may be destroyed but you will see that soon you will be shining just like la isla bonita that you are. For all I am see in San Juan shit is bad but mostly are broken glass and trees. I can't wait to see the new PR 🇵🇷 #puertorico#staystrong#sanjuan#huracanmaria#asthetic#peace#love
Ser diferente requiere compromiso y valentía para defender tu posición, más aún cuando aparecen estas personas que buscan editarte para hacerte igual a los demás. “¿Por que emprendes?” “busca un trabajo real” “nunca funcionará” entre otras frases célebres son las que escuchamos los emprendedores a diario. 😄